Reviewer: John Masarone
Positive Comments: I think the recording of this song is very good. There are a lot of good bits throughout. The positiveness of the song lyrics and instrumentation make me think it is very marketable. Nice guitar hook too.
Constructive Comments: The song has a lot of potential. I think the instrumentation of the guitar hook is very good and pronounced. However, I feel the vocal hook is not. Maybe more work needed there.The vocal is pitchy at times. Sometimes it sounds like the there is note dissonance in the instrumentation but sometimes it may just be the vocal singing flat. Also, the notes sung sound to be in a straight line (same note). A little variety will really help.