Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: It’s a beautiful song. The vocal is heavenly..very compelling. I like the ‘Can I do You Right’ concept. The chord progression is lovely. The song has a wonderful warm dreamy feel. The song delivers a real romantic atmosphere.
Constructive Comments: Lyrically I think that there are too many repetitions of the words ‘time’ and ‘right’. Perhaps you could have explored some rhymes or half-rhymes to introduce some new lyrical elements, just to mix it up a bit. I like the guitar arrangement but maybe the song could have started with a ‘clean’ acoustic guitar and the echo patch could have been introduced later to build the dream effect. I hope I’m not being too critical because it is very strong.