Alright by Spider kiting

Spider kiting

Broadjam Artist: Spider kiting
Song: Alright

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Wilco meets Dinosaur Jr! This is solid college radio material. Good solid groove and a really drum track & sound. Nice jangly guitars and I really like the nice laid back lead work. Very enjoyable tune –nice work!

Constructive Comments: On the verses the bass is reinforcing the 2 chords too much–it’s a really tight little circle, and here if the bass line stays in key but explores major pentatonic lines that keep the groove but open it up the song will breathe more. And as is it’s not pushing enough. I think you’d be amazed how much the bass line could change this tune. The vocals have a charm that a lot of people would like–for me I would want to get away from the falling note cadence at the end of each phrase and the way each phrase is fit into each verse line the same way without a more conversational / loose flow. Know what I mean?

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