IT’S BEEN A WHILE by Charlie Shock

Charlie Shock

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock

Reviewer: Barbara Christine Bechler

Positive Comments: I like how the song begins. I like the instrumentation and how the song builds to the hook. I like the quiet all the way to loud. I like your instrumentation. Your vocals are great.

Constructive Comments: Lyrics: I would just make sure that each verse relates to the chorus. Try re-crafting verse 2. And maybe keep all the same person viewpoint, or at least limit to two person viewpoint, you, we, etc., instead of “wonder why people….” wonder why you…. so, it may be just me, but two many viewpoints pulls me out of the song a little bit. 🙂

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