I’ll Be There by Laura Adamowsky

Laura Adamowsky

Broadjam Artist: Laura Adamowsky
Song: I’ll Be There

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Beautiful song of love! Synth intro sets a happy mood for this love song. Lots of eventide imagery (moonlight, stars) which augment the magical ambiance this song portrays. Lovely female vocal, crystal-clear communicates the love message so well. This is a nicely-crafted, impeccably performed song. Bravo!

Constructive Comments: If this is just a demo, it’s a great start. If you take it to the next level, I’d try to improve on the synth-sounding arrangement, possibly make it a little more richer and “real-sounding”. Nothing wrong with it really. It seems like I have heard this song before….

I’ll Be There by Laura Adamowsky

Laura Adamowsky

Broadjam Artist: Laura Adamowsky
Song: I’ll Be There

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Beautiful song of love! Synth intro sets a happy mood for this love song. Lots of eventide imagery (moonlight, stars) which augment the magical ambiance this song portrays. Lovely female vocal, crystal-clear communicates the love message so well. This is a nicely-crafted, impeccably performed song. Bravo!

Constructive Comments: If this is just a demo, it’s a great start. If you take it to the next level, I’d try to improve on the synth-sounding arrangement, possibly make it a little more richer and “real-sounding”. Nothing wrong with it really. It seems like I have heard this song before….

The Chill Grill by FRED GROSS

FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: The Chill Grill

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Nice instrumental song with some great blues players involved here. My favorite instrument was the wailing sax. Guitar sounds fantastic, too. Rhythm is tight. Bass player doing an awesome job. Keep up the good work.

Constructive Comments: God bless you! Keep making great music! Mrs. Kate

The Chill Grill by FRED GROSS

FRED GROSS

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: The Chill Grill

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Nice instrumental song with some great blues players involved here. My favorite instrument was the wailing sax. Guitar sounds fantastic, too. Rhythm is tight. Bass player doing an awesome job. Keep up the good work.

Constructive Comments: God bless you! Keep making great music! Mrs. Kate

Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix) by Jeff Roberts

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Very creative piece! Although I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by the originality of this song. I liked the way rap is interspersed with singing, instrumental sections. “Every soul needs time.” Some good wisdom in there. Chorus is catchy and clever. The “radio voice” is very cool, good diction there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t fond of the “extra voices” in the mix. To me, that was confusing. Over 7 minutes long! Surely this could be shortened up. There was a lot of time “waiting for the next thing to happen.” You probably had a good reason for it, though.

Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix) by Jeff Roberts

Jeff Roberts

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Even Now (Jimmy Michaels Night Mix)

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Very creative piece! Although I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by the originality of this song. I liked the way rap is interspersed with singing, instrumental sections. “Every soul needs time.” Some good wisdom in there. Chorus is catchy and clever. The “radio voice” is very cool, good diction there.

Constructive Comments: I wasn’t fond of the “extra voices” in the mix. To me, that was confusing. Over 7 minutes long! Surely this could be shortened up. There was a lot of time “waiting for the next thing to happen.” You probably had a good reason for it, though.