Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: Nicely recorded. I like the impact of the 12 string? as the song starts. A compelling vocal that sells the song. Nice percussion and bass. Strong chord progression. Powerful lyric idea.
Constructive Comments: I feel the song needs more instrumental variation to build the tune to a crescendo to hammer home the lyric message more light and shade for want of a better term. A bridge to take the song in a different direction temporarily would also add tension and release to the same effect.