Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: A cool, island beat and minor key instrumentation set this song up nicely. It’s a brainiac’s song with a lot of imagery related to nature/weather. The lyric writing is thoughtful. “Remember that we share the same blood and air.” That’s the strongest element of the lyrics…it’s a great hook. Every instrument played is top notch and it’s a flawless mix. I especially like the bass riffs. Great job!
Constructive Comments: I could tell that you worked really hard on the lyrics. Like I said they are well-thought out. It’s just that, well, after two listens…I still didn’t get how this whole song fits together. I understand the “Remember that we share..” hook…it’s GREAT. But how does it relate to the rest of the lyrics? That’s what I could not figure out. Maybe if I read the lyrics….