Reviewer: XS Paradigm
Positive Comments: Nicely done guitars, strong theme. Nice to hear instrumental hard rock of course. Without a vocal focus the other instruments may need a more active roll in determining as structure especially as the first part went by without too much change. But it’s in tune, time and has a due sense of tension. Could be part of something else, a larger work perhaps.
Constructive Comments: Would work on a soundtrack as is. However if it were a stand alone piece perhaps the lead section would come in earlier. Possibly synth orchestration could also come n to vary the tonality, and build it, reinforcing the harmony. Having said that a contrasting rhythmic part would vary it and make it seem to go by even quicker especially as the tempo is quite slow – which is okay of course, it may just dd tension and variety.