On Target by The Dots

The Dots

Broadjam Artist: The Dots
Song: On Target

Reviewer: FRED GROSS

Positive Comments: I like the female vocals. would have been cool to hear some harmonies come in when she changes to the higher octive. A bridge would also help the song out a bit, as it gets a little repeatative after awhile. Definitley has potential though!

Constructive Comments: The tone of the guitar could be a lot better, and the song needs more fullness, maybe not in the beginning but as it builds a more full bad ass sound would add to the production and really rock it out to the end. still, good potential.

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