Onion Head by Jeff Maguire

Jeff Maguire

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Onion Head

Reviewer: El Colorado

Positive Comments: Quality of the instruments is generally good. Recording is generally pretty decent. Guitar work shows a lot of experience and the effects were used strongly. The backup bass and drums are tight just need to give them more involvement – more to do.

Constructive Comments: I found the song to be not very interesting. The main idea changes very little over the 3 plus minutes the song plays which makes the song become too long. From my standpoint you lose the listener after the first minute. Personally to make this song more interesting I would go into a 12 bar blues style of change and have the lead follow that. The song becomes more conventional and at the same time more interesting.

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