Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Obviously this is Randal, and it’s a great effort. So much is working really well here–the guitar tone is really pleasing and the playing is smooth and the strumming rhythm works perfectly with the song. You’ve found the sweet spot with how to use your voice. I LOVE the way the phrasing, melody, and changes work together at the “of all yours sins” –that’s really a fantastic moment. Nice simple guitar solo that’s coming from the heart and really works with the tune. The ending is perfect for the tune and message.
Constructive Comments: Man you have really made great strides Randal. So much is working well here–I’m so glad to hear this. If you sent this song to a professional studio to have them do it you’d be amazed at how it would sound because the bones are here. You’ve written an excellent song my friend!