Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Nice riff right from the beginning. There’s a good melancholy mood and the arrangement is paced to display new parts throughout and keep the interest level high.
Constructive Comments: The string patches are too bright IMO–I’d want to try something softer (it’s hard to find a sweet patch…I know!). Where you have drum fills it clashes with the piano. I think you don’t need those busy fills and let the piano speak without competition. The piano parts could be more languid and elegant, as could the whole thing–I think going more slow and dramatic would work with what you’re doing here. All IMO of course.