Broadjam Artist: Powerklash
Song: Not Dreaming
Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol
Positive Comments: Good work. First thing that comes to mind is Local H, HIM, Soul asylum, (early royal bliss) to name a few. great writing & composition. Lyrics are great. Guitar work is spot on. Keep up the good work. Great drums, the song is very well put-together. great hooks. “you gave all that you could give but the well came up dry”. well thought out stuff.
Constructive Comments: Ummm…?? Im sure any thing we say here is stuff this band already knows. Mixing & mastering stuff mostly. ummm its pretty good. our bass player says more bass, but you know bass players. honestly cant think of a whole lot here. so again great job and looking forward to hearing more. more cow bell? uhhh the snare hits could be a little more present more fatness and crack, could be the head phones we are using. again great job all of you.
Broadjam Artist: lost on foot
Song: be my valentine
Reviewer: Kalyx Pistol
Positive Comments: Candle Box is a well known band that comes to mind,maybe a little tonic, This singers tone is listenable,pretty ok. The riffs are cool. i like the overall Melody. The lyrics, in content are not bad, but maybe rephrasing the ideas here would lead to lyrics that could lend to vocalizations with a tighter beat structure/ iambic pentameter.
Constructive Comments: Open up on the chorus make it bigger vocally and musically. tighten up the hook focus on the catch phrase and really sum up what the song is saying. bass! more bottom end. and the over all guitar tome could be warmer/fatter, but is clear and over all listenable. Wet up the vocals a bit just a little or a lot.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Shakin’ in My Shoes…….Sax
Positive Comments: very cool! super freak…great job putting all the different parts together. lots of changes to keep it interesting.
Constructive Comments: I like it just the way it is…Nice work!
Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS
Positive Comments: Strong drummer, really catchy guitar parts
Constructive Comments: The recording sounds very compresssed. Lots of very cool stuff happening but it sometimes gets lost in the mix. I could not understand the words…at all. but still this is a very good song.
Broadjam Artist: Felice Kaye-Cooper / Songwriter
Song: This Love
Positive Comments: catchy melodies, smooth playing with shades of light and dark.
Constructive Comments: beautiful playing, well done!
Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: keep going
Positive Comments: Nice guitar playing, tasty licks and smooth tones. very cool.
Constructive Comments: Awesome work!
Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Mi Mano
Positive Comments: Strong intro, the parts flow nicely together.
Constructive Comments: I wish I could understand the words? Cool song, very catchy.
Broadjam Artist: Joe Stewart
Song: Wrap Your Arms Around Me
Positive Comments: Nice clean vocal with a passionate delivery. Emotional lyrics and I love the male /female vocal harmonies. Love the little guitar parts!
Constructive Comments: This would make for a great soundtrack. Great job!
Broadjam Artist: Tyler Peters
Song: Tell My Story
Reviewer: DENNIS MAKEPEACE
Positive Comments: interesting bare arrangement but it works
Constructive Comments: no problems
Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Whatcha Gonna Do (instrumental version)
Reviewer: DNG Music
Positive Comments: I like the changes in the music and the bass line is dope. It sounds like a key change from hook to verse which is interesting, some great layers to the music itself. I really enjoyed the break down at the end
Constructive Comments: I feel the quality of the sounds chosen make this sound a little cheesy, I think that with some better sound selection you would have a great hit for someone to write to.