Salvation Army Man by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Salvation Army ManReviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: Beautiful, very poignant, love your lyrics. The song tells a a very sweet storyConstructive Comments: Nothing to add here!

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Salvation Army Man

Reviewer: Ashley Martin

Positive Comments: Beautiful, very poignant, love your lyrics. The song tells a a very sweet story

Constructive Comments: Nothing to add here!

Been So Long by The Meadows

Broadjam Artist: The MeadowsSong: Been So LongReviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: Beautiful song! Wish you had downloaded the lyrics. Awesome mix and vocals, . Reminds me a little of StaindConstructive Comments: Well done! My only suggestion woul…

The Meadows

Broadjam Artist: The Meadows
Song: Been So Long

Reviewer: Ashley Martin

Positive Comments: Beautiful song! Wish you had downloaded the lyrics. Awesome mix and vocals, . Reminds me a little of Staind

Constructive Comments: Well done! My only suggestion would be, make more songs! You rock.

Summer Magic by Sonic

Broadjam Artist: SonicSong: Summer MagicReviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: Nice catchy tune! Modern with a kind of 80’s throwback feel with some of the instrumentation. Vocals sound great, really nice and upbeat song!Constructive Comments: Sound…

Sonic

Broadjam Artist: Sonic
Song: Summer Magic

Reviewer: Ashley Martin

Positive Comments: Nice catchy tune! Modern with a kind of 80’s throwback feel with some of the instrumentation. Vocals sound great, really nice and upbeat song!

Constructive Comments: Sounds great! Only thing I could possibly say is a deeper/stronger bass beat might give it more depth. But just my opinion.

ICE MARCH (instrumental) by MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: ICE MARCH (instrumental)Reviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: This is a very nice arrangement. I love the underlying melody and there is a lot of power in the sound, I get great visuals. Constructive Comments: My monly ha…

MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)

Reviewer: Ashley Martin

Positive Comments: This is a very nice arrangement. I love the underlying melody and there is a lot of power in the sound, I get great visuals.

Constructive Comments: My monly hang-up is the brass/bass. I’m not sure what instrument, like a tuba, but it has a buzzing quality that, to me, didn’t mix well the overall sound.

35. Fine Line by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: 35. Fine LineReviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKSPositive Comments: COULD HAVE DONE A LOT MORE WITH THIS SUBJECT! CROSSING THE LINE/// HOW YOUR CROSSING OVER??? STORY MAYBE???Constructive Comments: JUST TOO SIMPLISTIC! LY…

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: 35. Fine Line

Reviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKS

Positive Comments: COULD HAVE DONE A LOT MORE WITH THIS SUBJECT! CROSSING THE LINE/// HOW YOUR CROSSING OVER??? STORY MAYBE???

Constructive Comments: JUST TOO SIMPLISTIC! LYRICLY! GREAT VOCALS AND MUSIC THOU!

Another Rainy Day by Bill Manchester

Broadjam Artist: Bill ManchesterSong: Another Rainy DayReviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKSPositive Comments: 2 CHORDS? NO RHYMEING? JUST NOT A HIT SONG YET! SORRY!Constructive Comments: I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS SONG!!!

Bill Manchester

Broadjam Artist: Bill Manchester
Song: Another Rainy Day

Reviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKS

Positive Comments: 2 CHORDS? NO RHYMEING? JUST NOT A HIT SONG YET! SORRY!

Constructive Comments: I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY ABOUT THIS SONG!!!

Just Another Day by Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. PateSong: Just Another DayReviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKSPositive Comments: COULD HAVE DONE BETTER WRITING! DOES NOT EVEN RHYME!!!Constructive Comments: SIMPLE SONG! RHYME WITH SIMPLE WORDS! TRY TO FIND SOMETHING A LIL MORE “INTERE…

Marc S. Pate

Broadjam Artist: Marc S. Pate
Song: Just Another Day

Reviewer: HAYWARD A. FRANKS

Positive Comments: COULD HAVE DONE BETTER WRITING! DOES NOT EVEN RHYME!!!

Constructive Comments: SIMPLE SONG! RHYME WITH SIMPLE WORDS! TRY TO FIND SOMETHING A LIL MORE “INTERESTING!